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[经验分享] PS范文展示:申请卡迪夫经济、银行与金融专业

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发表于 2013-10-23 16:29 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
2014年英国留学申请季已开启数月有余,不知道童鞋们的申请进度都到哪个阶段了?小编认为,在申请整个过程中,申请文书的写作是非常重要的,好的申请文书能为你的申请加分加点。

下面,就让我们来看看申请文书中的PS该怎么写?以下是申请卡迪夫大学经济、银行与金融专业的PS范文:

Personal Statement

By xxx


My favourite song is Snail by Jay Chou. As the music goes, the little snail fights its way through jungles and thorns. Just like the snail, I may not be the brightest student, but I have always been especially proud of the dedication and fervor I possess for my study and work.

Under the earnest and tireless instruction from my parents, I was raised to be an independent girl. In junior middle school, I had been shipped off to a boarding-school, where I learned to take care of myself and get along well with people. Both of my parents are businesspeople, so I was exposed to the commercial world at a very early age.

Being engaged in various commercial activities, I had chance to meet with people from all walks of life. This amazing business circle holds great appeal to me. Tracking back from my high days when I chose my college entrance wills, I was utterly ruthless in my determination to write down finance as my solemn choice.

Learning finance gives me a world of satisfaction and a sense of accomplishment. The more I learn, the more fulfilled I feel. It is the quest for knowledge and the challenge of learning that motivates me to pursue a master degree in International Economics, Banking and Finance at the esteemed Cardiff University.

I have received rigorous training at United International College (UIC), a school that is jointly founded by Beijing Normal University and Hong Kong Baptist University.

The undergraduate curriculum has allowed me to study in an English environment because all the courses are taught in English by elite professors all over the world. Meanwhile, the four-year study has equipped me with a systematic knowledge pool of finance, including Principles of Accounting, Information Technology, Applied Econometrics and Financial Management.

After four years of intense study, I understood that finance is the explanation of rational human behavior reflected in the financial markets. UIC strictly follows the evaluation method of Hong Kong Baptist University, that is to say, only 10% students can obtain A or A-.

However, because of my hard work, I still got an A on Principles of Accounting and Information Technology. Delving into the theoretical aspect of the financial world lays the corner stone of my intension to future study in finance.

Driven by my strong desire to immerse into a more international atmosphere, I attended a summer program at Hong Kong Baptist University to study the Human Love and Sex.

This one month broadens my horizon in this particular area, allowed me to view finance from a different perspective and inspired me to educate myself on an international scale.

In order to gain more insight about finance and assurance for myself, I have seized a lot of opportunities to enhance my professional skills. In the summer of 2010, I was more than fortunate to join the marketing team of the Global Education and Technology Group Dongguan Branch.

The first time I sold products to a customer, the first time I was rejected by a customer, the first time I made a bargain…so many first times that enabled me to apply what I have learned at school into practice.

It took patience and perseverance to make hundreds of cold calls to persuade customers. It was such tenacity that helped me get through customers’ complaints and incomprehension. I studied consumer psychology to arouse customers’ interests in our products.

During my internship, I soon realized that details determine success or failure. Thus, I treated my customers with utmost carefulness and attention. Step by step, I acquired outstanding sales skill to impress customers. This internship uplifted my ability to take a correct attitude towards study and work. In order to succeed, I have to take initiative in everything.

In addition to theoretic and practical knowledge I gained from school and society, I also devote much of my time into philanthropic activities. My father, a member of the Lions Clubs International always taught me to give back to society.

Abiding by his instruction, I started my involvement in volunteer work in freshman year to become a tutor for impoverished students with United Innovation Charity Club. Devoted much of my time to help the pupils at Jinfeng Elementary school, I found the secret recipe of soul satisfaction.

Following down this track, I spontaneously organized a volunteer activity to help cerebral palsy (CP) children. Looking into the innocent eyes of these special children, I felt the urge to lend a helping hand to them in their daily life.

I believe generous in giving help is one of the most cardinal characters a financier must possess and I had already made up my mind to become a loving and caring city woman.

I have long admired your esteemed university for its significant achievements in the teaching and research of finance. Your program of International Economics, Banking and Finance, with its well-structured curriculum, highly-productive faculty as well as a multitude of real-world projects matches my academic background and interest perfectly.

I hope to work in a world-class financial institution or a transnational enterprise after the completion of my master program.

In the long run, my plan is to start my own business and used profits to set up a charitable foundation to give back more to the society. I am determined and committed to succeeding in your esteemed master program, and I am confident that I will contribute to your community in the future.

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