[求助]英文询问结果信！

biantian

谁 有写的漂亮的英文询问申请结果的信？

比如说申请学校，申请工作。。。。

谢谢

max_ma1981

Dear Sir/Madam, I write this letter because i am concernning about the process of my application.I am eager to know if i am eligible to gain the offer(position) that i am applying for. Could you please let my know if i have been issued the offer (filled in the position)as soon as possible?I look forward to hear from you.

with many thanks

yours sincerely

XXX

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freya

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am ___and I am an applicant to your______ programme. My application Ref. No. is ___. I submitted my application material in February this year but have not got the result yet. Could you please do me a favour to check it ?

Thank you very much. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

XXXX

写查询信还是简单一点好啦，一看就懂，而且先要说你是谁谁，还有你的申请号码啦。

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