班主们，麻烦看看我的resume这样写行不行

我是活雷锋 · 发表于 2003-9-14 19:33

Resume

[B]Personal Information:[/B]
Family Name: xxx                            Last Name: xxx
##被过滤##: Male                                     Date of Birth: xxxxxx
Marriage Condition: Single                Health Condition: Excellent
Major: International Economics & Trade    Degree: Bachelor of Economics (studying now)
[B]Contact information:[/B]
Home Phone: xxxxxxxx             College phone: xxxxxxxx
Mobile (PHS): xxxxxxxx             Zip/Postal Code: 710061
Correspondence Address:    Caijing School 0113#
                                    Xi’an Jiao Tong University
                                    Shaanxi Province
                                    P. R. China
E-mail: chexuan_0802@eyou.com
[B]Education Background:[/B]
From 1994 to 2000: Jilin NO.1 Senior School, Jilin City, Jilin Province
From 2000 to Now: Xi’an Jiao Tong University, Xi’an City, Shaanxi Province
[B]English Ability:[/B]
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ass CET-4 and CET-6 (CET: College English Test)
•

ass TOEFL Score: 627
•Have abundant vocabulary and have certain ability at listening , speaking , reading , writing and translating.
•Can communicate with others freely in English and read some academic literatures.
[B]Social Practical [/B]
• 2000 - 2001  working as the leader at the department of social work in the Student Union of Xi’an Jiao Tong University
• 2001 - 2003  working as the secretary at the Staunch Stone Marketing Association
• 2003,3 - 2003,4  operating a small shop by myself, but failed soon

[B]Character Profile[/B]
•creative, imaginative, diligent and honest
•efficient, steady, ingenious, cooperative and dedicated
•teamwork, patient
•ambitious
[B]Personal Specialty[/B]
•have sound knowledge in both theory and practical in using computer, especially internet directi##被过滤## and website building
•excellent in badminton (the best score is the Eighth in our Economics and Finance School )
•good at tennis

我是活雷锋 · 发表于 2003-9-17 05:42

怎么？
没人理一下吗？

lugoo · 发表于 2003-9-18 07:52

个人感觉不好

我是活雷锋 · 发表于 2003-9-18 18:55

哪方面不好
你就不能说一下啊？
好吝啬啊！

lugoo · 发表于 2003-9-20 05:06

多写点实在的东西，character写那么多干什么，那个谁都能写
把社会工作写的稍具体一点
可以再加上一段不超过三行的学习目标

我是活雷锋 · 发表于 2003-9-23 19:38

有道理，呵呵，谢谢了！

hefang30 · 发表于 2003-9-24 05:32

说一个城市或省时从不加 city 和 province，Chinglish。西安市就是 Xi'an，陕西省就是 Shaanxi，就像纽约市叫 New York 而从不叫 New York City 一样。吉林市和吉林省也是同一个道理。
财经学院是写成 Cai Jing School 吗?后面的 0331# 是写在学院前边还是学院后边？交大是不是应该写成 Jiaotong University？
最重要的，英文的Resume是不是这个格式？我也不知道。感觉就是中文简历的格式。

lugoo · 发表于 2003-9-24 20:30

城市一般不加city，但省完全是可以加province的，当然你也可以简写，吉林市，吉林省就可以为Jiling, JL, P.R. China

neoch · 发表于 2003-9-25 03:40

Marital Status
Social Practice

就小城市而言,有必要加city

总之感觉很chinese的resume 一般般.