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标题: 什么样的雅思作文才能拿高分 [打印本页]

作者: 猪是的念来过倒    时间: 2013-7-18 16:26
标题: 什么样的雅思作文才能拿高分
1、淡化模板痕迹:

避免使用陈词滥调:不要上来就写every coin has two sides(=There is no garden without weeds). / as it is widely accepted / as we all know (=it is as clear as crystal that)括号里的表达法推荐使用。

2、大量的使用了形式主语和灵活句式(倒装,强调):

例如:

It must be stressed out that 必须强调指出

It is fairly difficult to say that (反驳)

It is not completely true to say that (让步反驳)

It is conceivable that 可以想象

3、首段一般是:1)改写题目,介绍文章背景;2)提出争议焦点;3)明确表明作家的观点。

4、再解释;举例子;反证法是展开分论点的三个重要的方法。

再解释:In other words ;To be more specific=specifically ;That is to say (也就是说)

举例子:To illustrate(举例说明);A case in point is that ;An obvious example is that

反证法:While ;Conversely(相反);On the contrary (相反)

5、有3-5(5-8)个亮点的词汇或是短语:

Optimize 使得最优化= improve

Gorgeous 美丽的 = beautiful

Maximize 使最大化= Multiply

6、一般的思路是:1)客观平衡写 2)让步支持或是让步反驳 3)分析问题解决问题,并且在尾段明确提出观点,也可以提出建议。

7、以第一人称的口吻My view is that /As I see it /From my perspective (如果题目指令中有要求,最好是第一人称口吻论述)

8、用到which / who 引导的定语从句

9、英语的思维是主句在前,条件在后If / as long as / on the condition that (以---为条件)

10字迹工整,250字以上。
作者: 六月天热    时间: 2013-7-22 18:07
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