12/04/2004
Dear Sir /Madam
My name is Zhao Weisheng．This is my second time to apply a student Visa to further my studies in the United Kingdom．Although I had been refused once, due to some misunderstandings I still hope that I can obtain a visa， because I believe that I have enough qualification, and have sufficient financial support to meet the requirements to stud in UK as a postgraduate student.
My father is a Director and General Manager of a tobacco enterprise in Jiangmen city Guangdong province，as we know tobacco business is one of the highly profitable businesses in the world．In China，the tobacco taxes occupies one sixth of Chinese government’s total revenue．Although, the Guangdong Tobacco Corporation limited of Jiangmen belongs to the government, my father, as the General Manager，still has very good salary．On the other hand，my mother is a vise director of the clinical department of The Jiangmen Central Hospital．This is the best Hospital of Jiangmen Area. Therefore, she also has a very stable income．Thus, I believe that my guarantors have enough financial abilities to support all my expenses when I study in UK.
After I graduated from South China Normal University, I spend more that half a year to improve my English level Very fortunately, I have a very good family：my parents have very good jobs and salaries. They encourage me all the time and support my daily expenses. Therefore，I can concentrate to improve my English on a full time basis, I locked myself in my bedroom to study and review English, meanwhile. I had attended an IELTS course on November 2003 in Guangzhou city．Through my effort，I had increased my IELTS score from 5.5 to 6.5 in half a year．Now I still insist studying English further more, I attend a spoken English course in Jiangmen City every week in brief, I want to say that I really want to study and I have enough learning abilities.
This time I am providing some new documents to support my qualification and my guarantors Capital. These papers include my parents’ certification of deposit, my new IELTS report，my English Test report of the University of Plymouth，the University English summer school course Offer of the University of Plymouth and the MSC degree Offer of the University of Plymouth etc.
I had tried my level best to prepare all the necessary documents for the interview, moreover, I have translated all the files myself I am witting to answer any further questi##被过滤##. It is my utmost hope that you will give me a kind c##被过滤##ideration.
Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
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APPLICANT[em10]
welson，我 感觉是不是可以把自己的personal statement和准备的材料清单融为一体呢？那样材料不会很杂，就是把你写又准备了一些材料来supporting的那一段换成准备了哪些材料？
我是第一次签：）
谢谢：）
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