1. (month), (year)
This is to certify that Mr./Miss... has won University Social Work Award due to his/her excellent work in the student activities between 20.. and 20....
Youth League
... University Committee
2. (month), (year)
This is to certify that Mr./Miss... has won Second-degree Scholarship due to his/her diligent study and outstanding results between 20.. and 20....
3.(month), (year)
This is to certify that Mr./Miss... has been awarded Advanced Youth League Member. 作者: neoch 时间: 2003-11-20 23:26
建议修改如下：
1. (month), (year)
This is to certify that Mr./Miss... was honored University Social Work Award due to his/her excellent performance in student activities of the academic year from 20.. to 20....
Youth League
... University Committee
2. (month), (year)
This is to certify that Mr./Miss... was honored the Second Prize of University Scholarship due to his/her hard exerti##被过滤## and outstanding achievement of the academic year from 20.. to 20....
3.(month), (year)
This is to certify that Mr./Miss... was awarded the Honor of Excellent Youth League Member.
最主要的是时态的错误。
作者: falcon 时间: 2003-11-21 14:37
man , u don'y understand the rule of stranslating this types of statment. 作者: neoch 时间: 2003-11-21 18:43
hehe...whatever :)
what i only trust is my 5 years' english translation and writing experience...作者: falcon 时间: 2003-11-24 05:41
嘿, maybe you are right, but I am only a student. maybe you are right, but I asked my English teacher, she said my translation was perfect, heehee.作者: neoch 时间: 2003-11-26 20:22
同意楼上.